This is the animatic for our music video; it helps to show how long each shot will be displayed for and allows us to see if there is anything we need to change. Our artist will be singing throughout.
An excellent first draft girls. I especially like the montage sequence which you've included.
What I would like to see is more performance from the singer. At the minute you have a very strong illustrative narrative but I think it needs breaking up with shots of your artist singing. OR you need to have her sing direct to camera all the way through (without the male character noticing) like she does here
Its set to be a private video I don't think people can view it :/
ReplyDeleteI have set it to public now; hopefully thats sorted it
ReplyDeleteAn excellent first draft girls. I especially like the montage sequence which you've included.
ReplyDeleteWhat I would like to see is more performance from the singer. At the minute you have a very strong illustrative narrative but I think it needs breaking up with shots of your artist singing. OR you need to have her sing direct to camera all the way through (without the male character noticing) like she does here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WA4iX5D9Z64