Pitch feedback

The comments we received from the class on possible problems with our video were of a few main concerns;

• There may be difficulty with us finding an appropriate female and male actor, who are attractive and fit the image of our video.
• It may be difficult for us to portray the storyline element effectively. 
• Also filming outside can often be difficult with the weather and lighting.

To overcome these issues we have already found our female artist who fits our look and image well. And we have a lose plan of our narrative which will be a simple and clear story of a break up between our artist and her boyfriend. This will be alternated with the shots of our star image. To overcome filming outside we will prioritise these scenes for when the weather is appropriate and film indoors when its not as good. The outside scenes will also be minimal and of lesser importance.