Feedback on my Digipak and Poster Draft.

Digi Pac

WWW                                                                                                                               Panorama over 3 panels is a nice idea

Pleasing colours, fresh and natural

Autumn leaf motif creates branding

EBI                                                                                                                                        Fonts are weak, lack legibility

Pictures over saturated and soulless

Back panel weak, image over developed and concrete wall out of place, less flesh, more class

Go back to research and see what you could include

low  Level 3   6/10

Poster

WWW

Layout conventions adhered – reviews, ratings, legal, label etc

EBI

Rule of 3rds need attention (move reviews to bottom)

Border is distracting

Leaves (although branding) may lack sophistication for teen audience

Remove frame

High level 2 5/10