Response to Feedback

After receiving teacher feedback on our draft music video, we have decided to re-film several parts of our video. Firstly, we need to re-film all the shots where the lighting is poor and ensure that shadows don't overpower the star; it is essential that are shots contain clarity to make it aesthetically appealing to watch. We plan to change the instrumental section completely; our feedback was that the running shots don't work too well therefore, after discussing the options, we decided we could have a montage of shots where the star is despairing (possibly tearing up a photograph) however we need to decide whether this is enough to fill the entire 40 seconds.

In some of the indoor shots, the camera is shaky (bedroom scenes are due to not having a tripod) and the zooming is jolty therefore, in response to this, we will re-film these and aim to create smoother transitions and camera movement. We also could use more shots of Kayleigh playing the guitar and put aside some time for her to practice so it looks more realistic and like she can play guitar.

The styling aspects can be fixed, when we re-film, we will have her wear dresses rather than light pink jeans and try to achieve bigger hair volume. If we are able to re-do the shots with the boy then we will make the recommended changes in regards to location and costume.