Thursday 8 November 2012

Teacher Video Feedback

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Girl excellent at lip sych, acting, emoting and making the song her own

EBI
·         Avoid the outdoors i.e tree shot of her texting on ground and running and the bridge
·         Lighten around the eyes – eg. Concealer
·         Meeting point –avoid brick wall and have a coffee, looking sophisticated and holding hands across table
·         Clothing; like neutrals but trousers too light when filming ( girl) bigger hair volume
·         Clothing – chinos and shirt and shoes (not trainers) for boy; bouffant hair(!)
·         Lighting poor in window shots and bedroom; tracing paper across window or light curtains, carpet darker rug.
·         Like guitar shots but practise and don’t have silly poses with guitar; play it!
·         Stand girl on box when in 2 shot with boy
·         Camera too static, so movement needed; tracks, pans, zooms ( be careful as too jerky)
·         Nice chair to play guitar in?
·         Room to bland and magnolia; pretty lights or tea lights, little pictures etc.

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