WWW
Panorama over 3 panels is a nice idea
Pose on front panel suitable, now find model
EBI
Beach feels out of place and unconnected to product
Take a lyric/song title and attempt to ‘amplify’ via digi pac
Back panel weak, hiding idea nice BUT the white door/staircase doesn’t work
Select more suitable font
Remember thirds and golden spiral for cover
Colour palate needs attention, too bland (muted colour pallet could work i.e. cream, yellow etc)
Go back to research and see what you could include
Low level 2 4/10
Poster
WWW
Layout conventions adhered – reviews, ratings, legal, label etc
EBI
Rule of 3rds need attention (more reviews and smaller font)
Fonts need attention, lack sophistication (not tween BUT TEEN)
Picture blurred (nice idea, coyness is suitable well done)
Low level 2 4/10
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